The Art of Patience
A maiden perched beside a pond
With tempting hook and pole in hand, And eager eyes fixed on the line
As hook to frenzied depth descends.
The shivers of a nibbling prey,
But yank too soon upon a pole
And haste will scare the fish away.
And reeled the prize with wiser ways,
But as she reached to grasp its fins,
It deeply pierced, and swam away.
When stronger beast strained on her line,
She longed to see a fish at last
But only found sea-weed entwined.
And sobbing to the ground she fell,
But soothing voice within her soul
Did bid her wait to see all well.
To move the hook in purposed path,
She sat in silence looking up
And patience brought her fish at last.
Wow, I really enjoy that poem. I like the diction, especially the alliterations, and the word "perched" is such a vivid word to describe the way she waits! Also Im a sucker for the words "tempting" and "shivers"! The words seem like they were chosen very carefully, and I can tell that you spent a lot of time on this to make it excellent—usually I dont even like amateur poetry, but I really do like this poem, along with your other works... Im excited for what you will post next.
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